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Alright... to start out with, love Ditzy! (Derpy)... But anyways good art style, great story line for originality, and nice color scheme. What I think you personally think is when she talks very sophisticated enlarge the font or change the font because i found difficulty reading those such parts. I'm not so sure if speech bubbles are your way to go, or if just having the words colored to match the character talk while roaming free among the comic slide, but do what you feel you think is right. So... Yeah! Great Job! And you should totally make a series from this one comic; it'll make a very funny one! <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="37" height="25" alt="" title=""/>