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Derpy's Lunch by Lamiaaaa Derpy's Lunch by Lamiaaaa
:iconcarrottopplz:: She'll be alright, Dinky... I hope.
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The art style was rounded, not as harsh or contain clear cut lines (this is good). The humor was very well presented, as Derpy is typically your average pony who is not of that social standing where one typically talks like that, and the fact that we can see it contrast through her previous type of speech (both in text and content) adds a smile to my face. The fact that she talked like Rarity was equally mirthful. Overall, good show. My one comment is the fact the sometimes the text was hard to read in Derpy's lines, as it sometimes blended in to the back round, but now I'm nitpicking.
-hug- Good job mate.
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This comic is cute and hilarious. The way that Derpy is drawn (especially during the first few panels with her normal crossed eyes) I find to be diabetes inducing. I also like the attention to detail in the comic like how Derpy's tongue has blue dots on it because it is her voice the the poison joke is impacting. It's also funny to me how Derpy's change is shown not just through the dialogue, but through the font her dialogue is presented in. The change to cursive really helps to imagine the kind of royal, sophisticated voice that she ends up having. The "tally-ho" at the end also gives the viewer an idea of the type of accent she starts to talk in. What also helps is the fact that as she is talking in her "joke" voice, she is not smiling or frowning so it helps imagine the voice that much more because it shows what emotions she conveys through her dialogue. And I can honestly say that I can't find anything that I dislike about this comic in terms of it's art or premise.

5 stars all around. /]*[\
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Esytha Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
For those who can't read cursive, this is what Derpy says.

Panel 1: Very well, my dear friend Carrot, if it is of your wish, then I shall oblige. I realize that the pristine health is paramount to alleviating any and all worries of those who care for me deeply, and I would be foolish to betray such trust that my friends and family would have with me.

Panel 2: Now then, shall we browse the immediate area for a location to hold our mid-day meal that would be more to your satisfaction? I do believe there was, at least, the nearby merchant providing a service of selling baked goods. As you very well know, I do enjoy greatly the baked delicacy known as muffins. It being my second choice this day. I suggest we move along so we may feast!

Panel 3: Make haste, my friend! The oven waits for no mare! Tally-ho!
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bluefoxycat Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Oh dear. Now let's just hope that Doctor Whooves doesn't become a muffin-lover...
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MLPRocks190 Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2014
Ohhhhhhhhh fck..
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DepryHunter Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I can barely read cursive :cor blimey: :cor blimey: :cor blimey: 
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Mickeymouseisgay Featured By Owner Jun 17, 2014
I'm gonna go get some of zecora's antidote and slip it is her muffin when she's not looking.
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psychopathneb Featured By Owner Apr 25, 2014  Student Artist
posh smarty
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:icontenshi07tengoku:
tenshi07tengoku Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2014
...so, poison joke makes Durpy talk more... normal??
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:iconworldwalker128:
WorldWalker128 Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2014
Derpy is a Derper no more. I must wonder if Carrot Top will want to turn her back now.
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:icondewani90:
Dewani90 Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
oh my gah, that herb turned derpy into mojo jojo
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:iconmickeymouseisgay:
Mickeymouseisgay Featured By Owner Jun 17, 2014
Oh my god, how did I not see that
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thunderbird19 Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Great comic! Love it.  You are to be congratulated.

One thing... does anyone else think of Patrick Stewart after Derpy/Ditzy is 'Poison Joked'?
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Mickeymouseisgay Featured By Owner Jun 17, 2014
Who
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StormAlchemist15 Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
woah. posh Derpy, very posh
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SummerTheAlicorn Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2014  Professional Filmographer
: TIS I! SUMMER THE ALICORN! AKA, THE LOST ALICORN PRINCESS (copyrighted pony)! But Carrot..... Shes to far gone. SOMEONE GET THE FRYING PAN! OR THE BUBBLE BATH XD
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ShinyCog Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2013
i wonder how long it took for me to understand what has just happened
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:iconrockint765:
RockinT765 Featured By Owner Nov 4, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I like her better this way.
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BlueCube84 Featured By Owner Nov 2, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
If it weren't for the poison joke making Derpy act like that, I'd say that she's s changeling
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cointosser888 Featured By Owner Oct 24, 2013
...
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:iconkatfairy:
katfairy Featured By Owner Oct 15, 2013
I don't know why I heard Derpy speaking in John Cleese's voice.
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:iconmickeymouseisgay:
Mickeymouseisgay Featured By Owner Jun 17, 2014
Who
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:iconirishshift:
Irishshift Featured By Owner Oct 2, 2013
OH.MY.GOD the poison joke turned Derpy into a Brit!! :iconnooooooplz:
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Dragonking17 Featured By Owner Sep 30, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Way past awesome! This comic blew my mind away! Flash Fire: What's the big deal I have her her talk like that. Dragonking17: You have? When? Flash Fire: Lost of time people just don't notice since they do not spend a lot of time with her. She is one of my best friends in Ponieville after all and she likes me even though I am a dragon who is a jolly trickster that can turn into a pegasus.
   
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Stygian359 Featured By Owner Sep 5, 2013   Filmographer
I would happily see this in cannon.
I love the idea greatly, simply put this is a prime example of mental play worked onto the premise that all is opposite to what it actually is.
Knowing Derpy as I do I instantly loved this comic styled strip with immense pleasure, bravo!
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NaviOrb Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2013   General Artist
lol! great job!
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The-Original-Doctor Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2013
Ahh, my dear Ditsy- Wait, Poison Joke, Oi! DITSYYYYYYYYYYYY
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princssluna1212 Featured By Owner Oct 27, 2014  Student Artist
ditzy..
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:iconspike--the-dragon:
SPIKE--the-dragon Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2013
Derpy, I'm not used to your proper grammar, please speak normally
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Allfather-Vohas Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
-_-

Gah, oh the pain... The irony of the situation is somewhat... Amusing... But somewhat... Annoying....
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SPIKE--the-dragon Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2013
lol
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:iconallfather-vohas:
Allfather-Vohas Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Curse You, I have mixed feelings but at least you made me Laugh.
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SPIKE--the-dragon Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2013
;p
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:iconallfather-vohas:
Allfather-Vohas Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Good Man!
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SPIKE--the-dragon Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2013
:D
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matchmakingdove1028 Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2013  Student Digital Artist
LOL
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MasterBrattan Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2013
Quick! Somepony get Zecora ASAP! We've got to Re-Derp the De-Derped Derpy.
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foxflaim Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
lolz
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:iconmaxleo7:
MaxLeo7 Featured By Owner Jul 10, 2013
Derpy!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Jesserfly Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Awesome. LOL her tongue is polka dot XD
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Onyxjew944 Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2013
Alternate Title: How to Become Quintessentially British in One Step.
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HawkflightOfThunder Featured By Owner Jul 3, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
What did she just say now? (No really, what?)
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PhysicistEarthPony Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2013
In simple terms:
I'm sorry for putting myself at risk, let's go get some muffins.
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:iconhawkflightofthunder:
HawkflightOfThunder Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
Thank you for clearing that up, want some muffins?
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:icondonovan9999:
Donovan9999 Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2013
*robs the muffin bank*
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:icon123cupcake:
123cupcake Featured By Owner Jul 2, 2013
poor dinky... :'(
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popbutter Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
LOL what a twist
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gogeta17 Featured By Owner Jun 30, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
WHAT THE FU- (explosion)!!!!
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Magic-Z-Dog Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2013
put poision joke in her muffin XD
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:iconthe-original-doctor:
The-Original-Doctor Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2013
Oi! What a horrible thing to do to my already poor Ditsy!
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CharlestheComicArtis Featured By Owner Jun 17, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
this is the most amazing thing ive ever seen that i would suicide because everything else would be just a sad dissappoint
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katban Featured By Owner Jun 16, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
0.o........huh?!
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