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Derpy's Lunch by Lamiaaaa Derpy's Lunch by Lamiaaaa
:iconcarrottopplz:: She'll be alright, Dinky... I hope.
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:iconpyromaniacz22568:
The art style was rounded, not as harsh or contain clear cut lines (this is good). The humor was very well presented, as Derpy is typically your average pony who is not of that social standing where one typically talks like that, and the fact that we can see it contrast through her previous type of speech (both in text and content) adds a smile to my face. The fact that she talked like Rarity was equally mirthful. Overall, good show. My one comment is the fact the sometimes the text was hard to read in Derpy's lines, as it sometimes blended in to the back round, but now I'm nitpicking.
-hug- Good job mate.
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This comic is cute and hilarious. The way that Derpy is drawn (especially during the first few panels with her normal crossed eyes) I find to be diabetes inducing. I also like the attention to detail in the comic like how Derpy's tongue has blue dots on it because it is her voice the the poison joke is impacting. It's also funny to me how Derpy's change is shown not just through the dialogue, but through the font her dialogue is presented in. The change to cursive really helps to imagine the kind of royal, sophisticated voice that she ends up having. The "tally-ho" at the end also gives the viewer an idea of the type of accent she starts to talk in. What also helps is the fact that as she is talking in her "joke" voice, she is not smiling or frowning so it helps imagine the voice that much more because it shows what emotions she conveys through her dialogue. And I can honestly say that I can't find anything that I dislike about this comic in terms of it's art or premise.

5 stars all around. /]*[\
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:icontenshi07tengoku:
...so, poison joke makes Durpy talk more... normal??
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:iconworldwalker128:
Derpy is a Derper no more. I must wonder if Carrot Top will want to turn her back now.
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Dewani90 Feb 24, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
oh my gah, that herb turned derpy into mojo jojo
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thunderbird19 Feb 16, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Great comic! Love it.  You are to be congratulated.

One thing... does anyone else think of Patrick Stewart after Derpy/Ditzy is 'Poison Joked'?
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:iconstormalchemist15:
woah. posh Derpy, very posh
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SummerTheAlicorn Jan 3, 2014  Professional Filmographer
: TIS I! SUMMER THE ALICORN! AKA, THE LOST ALICORN PRINCESS (copyrighted pony)! But Carrot..... Shes to far gone. SOMEONE GET THE FRYING PAN! OR THE BUBBLE BATH XD
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:iconshinycog:
i wonder how long it took for me to understand what has just happened
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RockinT765 Nov 4, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I like her better this way.
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BlueCube84 Nov 2, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
If it weren't for the poison joke making Derpy act like that, I'd say that she's s changeling
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