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:iconlamiaaaa:
:iconcarrottopplz:: She'll be alright, Dinky... I hope.
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Alright... to start out with, love Ditzy! (Derpy)... But anyways good art style, great story line for originality, and nice color scheme. What I think you personally think is when she talks very sophisticated enlarge the font or change the font because i found difficulty reading those such parts. I'm not so sure if speech bubbles are your way to go, or if just having the words colored to match the character talk while roaming free among the comic slide, but do what you feel you think is right. So... Yeah! Great Job! And you should totally make a series from this one comic; it'll make a very funny one! :squee:
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:iconfromthevaultliterate:
first off, let me get this out of my system: AKLSJDFHAKJSDFHKJALSDFHAKLALKHSDF-- *dies from derpy cuteness*

*cough cough* alright then, onto the critique

The Good: The artwork/art style is absolutely amazing. Details were clear as a sunny, non-cloudy day, the dialogue is absolutely HILARIOUS! I especially like what you did for the Poison Joke, having it radiate a neon blue, very nice touch.

The Bad: Whereas Derpy's dialogue is hilarious, it is however, hard to read due to the font used. Other than that, i could see nothing else wrong with this comic.

Can't wait to see more art from you! i'm sure it will be amazing! :D
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~KopaLeo 5 days ago  Hobbyist General Artist
I like her this way. Don't "cure" her, Zecora.
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~FaethS May 9, 2013  New member
Doctor Whooves: Who are you and what did you do to Derpy!? O_o;
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:iconvaryllus:
I am pleased that I read the whole thing :)
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~topnotchpony May 3, 2013  New member
Oh my gosh wut
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:icontwilightjawdropplz: :iconsaysplz: DERPY IS SPEAKING FANCY!
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:iconnightingaele:
I read this out-loud to myself with Derpy speaking in a fancy English accent. It was awesome and helped make me laugh :D
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~kcjudy Apr 22, 2013  New member Student Digital Artist
ok...............
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:iconcentaur71:
Lamiaaaa, You have a really nice art style!
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:iconfletchstar:
i want the real derpy back
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:iconbrendacecicuca:
me too!! Back Derpy!!
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