Alright... to start out with, love Ditzy! (Derpy)... But anyways good art style, great story line for originality, and nice color scheme. What I think you personally think is when she talks very sophisticated enlarge the font or change the font because i found difficulty reading those such parts. I'm not so sure if speech bubbles are your way to go, or if just having the words colored to match the character talk while roaming free among the comic slide, but do what you feel you think is right. So... Yeah! Great Job! And you should totally make a series from this one comic; it'll make a very funny one!
first off, let me get this out of my system: AKLSJDFHAKJSDFHKJALSDFHAKLALKHSDF-- *dies from derpy cuteness*
*cough cough* alright then, onto the critique
The Good: The artwork/art style is absolutely amazing. Details were clear as a sunny, non-cloudy day, the dialogue is absolutely HILARIOUS! I especially like what you did for the Poison Joke, having it radiate a neon blue, very nice touch.
The Bad: Whereas Derpy's dialogue is hilarious, it is however, hard to read due to the font used. Other than that, i could see nothing else wrong with this comic.
Can't wait to see more art from you! i'm sure it will be amazing!
*cough cough* alright then, onto the critique
The Good: The artwork/art style is absolutely amazing. Details were clear as a sunny, non-cloudy day, the dialogue is absolutely HILARIOUS! I especially like what you did for the Poison Joke, having it radiate a neon blue, very nice touch.
The Bad: Whereas Derpy's dialogue is hilarious, it is however, hard to read due to the font used. Other than that, i could see nothing else wrong with this comic.
Can't wait to see more art from you! i'm sure it will be amazing!
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